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Origins of the Malachite Queen

Wed Jul 8, 2009, 1:42 PM
having read through my story several times I have found several mistakes in the story line that when put with the rest do not add up. To fix these I will be adding several new characters adding insight to what Vladimir is doing and changing some of the events to flow better. the first major change has occurred in chapter 5. It being from Vladamir's view point in which a new character is added 'Lotus' his secretary and Lillian Saturn's childhood friend. Another character in which will be added around chapter 15 is 'Sarah' leader of the psychopathic, cannibalistic, and bio engineered strike team known as the Harukar. Well tell me what you think of these changes once you read them and I hope you enjoy, I have finished edits up to chapter 15 but since chapter 5 still has 0 views i see no point in uploading them.

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i am a writer for fun atm but someday wish to go big feel free to comment on deviations constructive criticism is welcome, it will help in the long run
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Hi, this is Sarah "Rin" from ASL class nice art! I haven't read your stories yet, but your are is really cool!
why thank you ^^ i got one that i havent put up yet, ill show you tomorrow.

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The Power of the Machine Spirit is with me... Ah yes a challenge worthy of my skills, it will only take me a moment-Tech Priest

An open mind is like a great fortress with its gates unbarred and left wide open.- Tzeentch
Hey Jeff, havent seen you around, what have you benn up to?

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what lunch u got?

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The Power of the Machine Spirit is with me... Ah yes a challenge worthy of my skills, it will only take me a moment-Tech Priest

An open mind is like a great fortress with its gates unbarred and left wide open.- Tzeentch
that would be 2nd. sorry for the lateness of my reply =)

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Freedom of speech is the right to yell "Theater" in a crowded Fire.
no worries, damn i got first :(, so what have you been up to?

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The Power of the Machine Spirit is with me... Ah yes a challenge worthy of my skills, it will only take me a moment-Tech Priest

An open mind is like a great fortress with its gates unbarred and left wide open.- Tzeentch
nothing much, just lich king and guitar. you?
sorry again.

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Freedom of speech is the right to yell "Theater" in a crowded Fire.

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