having read through my story several times I have found several mistakes in the story line that when put with the rest do not add up. To fix these I will be adding several new characters adding insight to what Vladimir is doing and changing some of the events to flow better. the first major change has occurred in chapter 5. It being from Vladamir's view point in which a new character is added 'Lotus' his secretary and Lillian Saturn's childhood friend. Another character in which will be added around chapter 15 is 'Sarah' leader of the psychopathic, cannibalistic, and bio engineered strike team known as the Harukar. Well tell me what you think of these changes once you read them and I hope you enjoy, I have finished edits up to chapter 15 but since chapter 5 still has 0 views i see no point in uploading them.
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